Guess what day it is!
Let's read.
You'll need to get yourself to this blog, and open your Writer's Notebook.
Yesterday you did a little bit of research and individual work based on your needs.
Let's get ourselves focused on the upcoming task. We're going to spend the next couple days looking at some student models. These are real personal statements that high school students wrote.
Right now you only need to focus your attention on one of the following. I will tell you which link to click on.
Copy and Paste the following questions into your Writer's Notebook:
- Which model are you reading?
- What does the writer want you to learn about her/him? What was his or her goal in telling you this particular story?
- How does the writer introduce their essay? How is it effective or not effective?
- What are 1 or 2 powerful sentences that show who this person is and what they are trying to convey?
- What part of their writing was most successful? (Voice, word choice, story arc, clear ideas, etc)
- Do you see any instances of ethos (credibility), logos (logic), or pathos (emotion)? How do the affect the writing?
- How might you apply these techniques to your own writing?
- What could make their essays better or stronger?
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